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Plein Air Poetry's avatar

"Every wild thing that

escapes from the nest is

so perfect, so blessed with

precision, so pure that

there’s multiplied sadness when

it fails to endure."

Lovely!!!

Lady Mad's avatar

This is phenomenal! I especially enjoyed your heavy use of imagery. It makes the whole scene feel painfully vivid.

Amelia Adams's avatar

This was fantastic.

Francis F's avatar

This made me tear up 😢 Beautifully written.